My Frances Dowell Story

Alright this is probably going to be my longest blog post yet so buckle up >:D

In my L.A. class, we were lucky enough to work with a professional writer Frances Dowell. Frances Dowell is A incredible writer and I a aspire to be as great as her one day

 

 

 

Biography

Well, for this project we were working on writing stories, and my first idea was a super hero school. This book was going to be about a girl named Marcille Lesser, she was a edgy sort of kid and in the middle of writing my book I began to dislike it. So I started a new one, a book about two sisters relationship. The girls were named Taylor and Aubree, but you went through this story in the Eyes of Aubree. You learn this tale of troubles and tribulations of these two sisters and eventually in the end they come to realize that they will always love each other no matter what.

Now let’s talk more about the process of writing this book, something came up when I still writing my super hero book. My peers told me that my book was too fast paced and I needed to slow down and be more detailed. And that’s around the time when I started to realize how much I actually didn’t like my story. Marcille was too edgy and at times it felt like she should just be a villain, so I tried to tweak the story so Marcille was actually a bad guy in disguise. But again it didn’t make a good story. So when I actually took a step back it looked at it  as a whole, I realized how much the story literally sucked. So I started a new one and I enjoyed writing it way more than my first story. Aubree was much more kind-hearted but still had flaws about her, like how she always had a biased against her sister since she thought she was much prettier than herself. Taylor at first was shown to be really mean and was a minor antagonist against Aubree but as time went on it revealed how jealous of her sister she was and how much she just wanted to be loved. And at the end they both find out their true feelings for each other and finally they love each other.

Well, that’s all for now bye!🐸✨🌿